Comments on: Cross The Zone. http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Tue, 14 Oct 2008 12:15:34 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: max m http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/comment-page-1/#comment-22 max m Tue, 14 Oct 2008 12:14:05 +0000 http://deon1.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-22 hi deon how are you?? what you up to?? i am max and my favourite thing to do is to play football all day and my favourite subject is P.E or maths. hi deon how are you?? what you up to?? i am max and my favourite thing to do is to play football all day and my favourite subject is P.E or maths.

]]> By: katherine http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/comment-page-1/#comment-14 katherine Mon, 23 Jun 2008 06:17:56 +0000 http://deon1.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-14 Well done Deon you seem to be a fast runner from my point of view.Great job you got and by the way you are really i like the way you right poety its very good! :) :) Bye: Katherine :) Well done Deon you seem to be a fast runner from my point of view.Great job you got and by the way you are really i like the way you right poety its very good!
:) :)

Bye: Katherine :)

]]> By: AllStars http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/comment-page-1/#comment-13 AllStars Fri, 20 Jun 2008 11:10:44 +0000 http://deon1.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-13 Well done Deon on working hard and making it to the zone carnival. You seem to enjoy writing poetry, I like the image of you fighting to finish the race like lightning - I picture you darting and surging through people as you make your way to the finish line. Keep on writing ;) MrsP Well done Deon on working hard and making it to the zone carnival.
You seem to enjoy writing poetry, I like the image of you fighting to finish the race like lightning – I picture you darting and surging through people as you make your way to the finish line.
Keep on writing ;)
MrsP

]]> By: katherine http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/comment-page-1/#comment-12 katherine Thu, 19 Jun 2008 09:02:40 +0000 http://deon1.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-12 Hi Deon, great post you got and what place did you come in again? also that post was about the crosss country and that sound freaky how you said the creeping, was scaring me out but any way good job on the cross country. :) From: Katherine :) Hi Deon,
great post you got and what place did you come in again?
also that post was about the crosss country and that sound freaky how you said the creeping, was scaring me out but any way good job on the cross country. :)

From: Katherine :)

]]> By: sokeina http://deon1.edublogs.org/2008/06/06/cross-the-zone/comment-page-1/#comment-11 sokeina Tue, 17 Jun 2008 09:10:31 +0000 http://deon1.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-11 Hi, I really liked how you tried to make that rhyme and it was very funny because you put things that are just out of the ordinary into it to make it rhyme. I think that a poem or song always sounds better when it rhymes. In the first picture when all of you boys are crossing your arms hafiz sort of fades into the background and haley looks like he is going to puke but it actually looks really cool. I think that haley only looks like that because he was laughing and when he was in that posion Mrs.P took the photo and he never realised. Well hope to talk to you soon! Tooooooooooooooooooooooodles :D :P Hi,
I really liked how you tried to make that rhyme and it was very funny because you put things that are just out of the ordinary into it to make it rhyme. I think that a poem or song always sounds better when it rhymes. In the first picture when all of you boys are crossing your arms hafiz sort of fades into the background and haley looks like he is going to puke but it actually looks really cool. I think that haley only looks like that because he was laughing and when he was in that posion Mrs.P took the photo and he never realised.
Well hope to talk to you soon!
Tooooooooooooooooooooooodles :D :P

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